Jesuits in Space! It’s pretty good, and builds suspense very well, but sometimes suffers from “awkard sci-fi dialogue” syndrome. If you have to tell your readers that your characters are laughing, the joke wasn’t actually funny.
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Jesuits in Space! It’s pretty good, and builds suspense very well, but sometimes suffers from “awkard sci-fi dialogue” syndrome. If you have to tell your readers that your characters are laughing, the joke wasn’t actually funny.